Composition Exercise
I posted two layouts yesterday and had one comment from Tuan. Therefore, I decide to chance one and make a new one. Please take a look at them and criticize them. Thanks!
This is the one I changed.
And this is a new one.
"Redeeming the time, for days are evil". What do you think about this sentence? This is one of my favorite sentences.
1 Comments:
The 2nd one is better. However, you made a mistake in "etween ..."(the one below "6th avenue") And it's difficult to determine the whitespaces since there's no edge on your image.
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